I am Invisible Friday, October 28, 2011 at 10:34pm

No one sees me or hears when I cry out, No one to catch me if I fall.

I am a tidal wave strong and unyielding.

I am a lonely rock beneath the sea stuck under the sand.

I am Invisible

I am a bird shot from the sky never to fly again.

I am a Rose in a garden overgrown, old and withered Never to be picked.

I am Invisible

I am the wind cold and icy.

I am a cloud in a storm dark, wet and waiting to disappear, So the sun can shine once more.

I am Invisible

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Comment by Christine Sutton on November 20, 2011 at 8:34am

We speak though our creativity, we reach out spirituality through our creative voice, this is beautiful and full of pain all at once. You have touched me. I have cried. I think the crying is something we need; I only hope crying helps bring those we love from the physical to the spiritual, from our head to our hearts. That is my hope... it is not my knowing, yet. Much love to you, Christine

Comment by Melissa Broome on November 13, 2011 at 3:10am

Anna,

I think what I was trying to get across is I wanted to be invisible at first but not anymore. I too hid for 3 to 4 months as much as I could with 3 small children. most of my side of my family are gone already. my husbands side lol are annoying lol they love drama yah know.. And my husband is grieving himself..my mom was like his second mom so he's trying to deal with his own grief and we all do in our own ways.

So sorry about your husband. If yah ever need to talk I'm here

big hugs to you

melissa

Comment by anna l. on November 13, 2011 at 2:05am

Melissa I am sorry you are feeling invisible.  I guess that was what I was hoping to be when I hid out alone after my husband died in the summer.  But my family and friends made sure I knew I was not.  I hope you have people around you who at the very least treat you as visible, meaningful, and worthwhile, until you can see yourself that way again.

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